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tomeo5 (August 30, 2008 at 3:31 pm)
lol that was gay...tbh i wanted to kill myself
maximuswynn (February 24, 2008 at 9:47 am)
Really cool. I liked the eloquence and the beauty of the words. They took me all the way to the ocean, but truth be told I do live close to it (the Aegean).
nordicsky (January 16, 2008 at 11:25 pm)
Oh thank you so much Stefani, I'm so glad you noticed the two lines between each stanza. This year I'm trying to experiment as much as possible with my structures and subjects.I've started to learn some of the theory of poetry; iambic, trochaic, spondaic, pyrrhic and to learn that verse has feet consisting of stressed and unstressed syllables. I wish I'd never asked!Take care.Love Peter
livingpassion (January 15, 2008 at 11:00 pm)
I'd never seen an actual sextant before, but I remember making rudimentary ones from notecards and ... I think it was paper clips in Junior high school science class.
livingpassion (January 15, 2008 at 10:57 pm)
Refreshing images! I also enjoyed how you went from completely natural images to those natural images being interpreted in the context of sailing a ship, to the completely human set of images and feelings related to being on a ship. A very neat concept and I enjoyed it. |
